Full Mock Test 04Writing Β· Writing Material
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Writing Material
CDI Writing Test 2 (1)
Part 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
The table below shows the number of cars made in Argentina, Australia and Thailand from 2003 to 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Words: 0
Results
7.0
Good User
π Part 1 - Task Achievement
Task Achievement
7
Covers requirements adequately
Coherence & Cohesion
7
Logically organized
Lexical Resource
6
Adequate range of vocabulary
Grammar & Accuracy
7
Good variety of structures
βοΈ Part 2 - Essay Writing
Task Response
7
Addresses all parts of task
Coherence & Cohesion
7
Clear progression
Lexical Resource
7
Sufficient range and accuracy
Grammar & Accuracy
6
Generally good control
425
Total Words
175
Part 1 Words
250
Part 2 Words
85%
Vocabulary Variety
β Strengths
- Good use of data comparison and trend analysis
- Clear paragraph structure with logical flow
- Appropriate academic vocabulary and linking words
β οΈ Areas for Improvement
- Some minor grammatical errors affecting clarity
- Could benefit from more varied sentence structures
- Consider using more precise vocabulary for data description
π Detailed Analysis
Task Achievement (Part 1)
Your response adequately covers the main features of the chart, showing clear comparisons between 1997 and 2017 data. You identified key trends and provided relevant data points. Consider including more specific numerical details to strengthen your analysis.
Task Response (Part 2)
You successfully discussed both viewpoints regarding technology's impact on life complexity. Your personal opinion is clearly stated and supported with relevant examples. The essay demonstrates good critical thinking and balanced argumentation.
Language Use
Your writing shows good command of English with appropriate academic style. Vocabulary is generally accurate and varied. Grammar structures are mostly correct with good complexity. Focus on eliminating minor errors for higher precision.